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Venting through my writing

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 34yrs • M •
A CTL of 1 means that MugenNoKarayami is a contributing member of Captain Cynic.
Venting through my writing
I've been under a lot of depression and sadness lately...


Candy Tears

Everything has been lost
no matter what I try to do
And this is the cost
Brush away the ashes and start something new

After all the heartbreak
I feel helpless and abused
there is nothing left for me to make
All of this emotion; I'm so confused

Then the tears being to shed
my wall of sanity is broken
---(haven't thought of this part yet)
---

I have learned to love the taste
but grown to hate the pain
can't go on with the troubles I'm faced
In the end there is no gain...



~Could I get some feed back from you on this one, not soo sure about the second stanza(sp?) thank youu everyone

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"I'm a human being, God Dammit!! My life has value!!!"
 38yrs • M •
A CTL of 1 means that Vortex271 is a contributing member of Captain Cynic.
An idea for the second stanza-

From my eyes flow rivers of deep crimsom red
I grasp tight to resolutions golden token.

Really nice job, Mugen.

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""As I sit before the fire, I wonder how many before myself have been burned.'"
 34yrs • M •
A CTL of 1 means that MugenNoKarayami is a contributing member of Captain Cynic.
Thank you Vortex, that Idea has just been a seed for my own idea. hmm very intresting.. perhaps I will finish this tomorrow.


I seem to write very well when My mind is completely scrambled with feelings and strong emotion.

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"I'm a human being, God Dammit!! My life has value!!!"
 49yrs • F •
angeleyes31 is new to Captain Cynic and has less than 15 posts. New members have certain restrictions and must fill in CAPTCHAs to use various parts of the site.
Hello. how about this, well the first line of what the previous person wrote, then....... all of the heartfelt words spoken....

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 32yrs • F •
Rosejane06 is new to Captain Cynic and has less than 15 posts. New members have certain restrictions and must fill in CAPTCHAs to use various parts of the site.
how about....

quote:
i await those ill-minded words
which dread to be spoken



..?

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