this is about the hidden compassions of the human soul which i've got to experience

i am stranded amidst a balderash of emotions ,
swayed by my thoughts so puerile,
penchant upon self destruction ,
still managing a spurious smile.

but inside me theres a raging storm ,
not just the eyes my heart wept along
for all these years that i ve been marred,
crippled and choked by lady life so hard,

but if u see life from an optimists eye,
youll see that from ashes do new civilizations rise ,
and salvations blesses the most ruffled human soul,
when the mystery of life they explore,
lifes just a closed box u see,
its what u think is inside ,
a bed of roses or a castle of thorns............


welll guys this a lill insight into what i think about life , hope u all agree with me, and heres how to contact me ,
love y al
http://www.hi5.com/i?l=VSL2S4X

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