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 31yrs • M •
A CTL of 1 means that libarata is a contributing member of Captain Cynic.
spiders
there are spiders in the minds of all, do not let them cast the webs they spin for they can do nothing but spread dullnes, break out of the grasp and destroy them and forever be free in mind and spirit

its my first one
made it in summer school(i got bored)

adios!

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"let them not control you"
 31yrs • M •
A CTL of 1 means that libarata is a contributing member of Captain Cynic.
go and watch the basis of death"the father the son and the holy ghost"
pound the pavement with the cadence of the cross
lurching our generation
into the books of time
destruction immenent
unless we become one in this feeble freedom we must sacrafice
much of what we love
time can only tell
if we have what it takes
to overcome what the past blood
lines have already written for our kind
you angels cannot protect you know
the bible already damns one nation to burn in hell
it is up to the masses to forge the new path
a path yet un-open


kinda pathetic
but hey its true

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"let them not control you"
 31yrs • M •
A CTL of 1 means that libarata is a contributing member of Captain Cynic.
so if anyone wants to let me know how theyt are just say how they are

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"let them not control you"
 31yrs • M •
A CTL of 1 means that libarata is a contributing member of Captain Cynic.
each of us are pivitol in the lives of others around us
when we sneeze it changes someone
changing is our way
always changing
when we dont change is when we die
and people are starting to become
cement stones in ideas
never changing
trying to be cool
trying to be "normal"
slowly
we all die

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"let them not control you"
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 32yrs • M
A CTL of 1 means that awakendwraith is a contributing member of Captain Cynic.
Bleh.

No, they're pretty good.

There is a HUGE lack of poetic devices, but it seems raw.
A little anyway.
There is a lesson in raw poetry.
Never use words unless they are needed.
quote:
and people are starting to become

The word and is not needed. And in the line above, the word "its" is not needed. Take them out and the emotion takes less time to come across.
Unfurtunately emotions easily fade. Unless you think that those words will maek them feel the "raw" emotion, dont use them.

But thats only when you arent using any poetic devices.

I like the little bits of philosophy you have in them.
Telling people how to lve there lices.
I don't nececcarily agree, but its cool all them same.

Keep writing. You'll get better.
If you look at my thread, which I know you have, you'll see that the start of the thread is kinda crappy, up untill I Guess I'm The Enemy.

Keep writing. Practice makes perfect.

All in all, I like it.

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"Why cry for those that often cry? Instead, help them smile, and smile for those that smile."
 31yrs • M •
A CTL of 1 means that libarata is a contributing member of Captain Cynic.
in the end we are all the enemy
growing in
and fading out
born into this world
blank of mind
blank of heart
elders writing on our scrolls
filling them with so called rights
and removing the wrongs
poor poor teachings
lead to our demise
as individuals
killing the souls
just be free
and forever live in the hearts of others


yeah its all raw
the last one i just thought of
i write how i think and change later

and thanx for the feed back

i dont use poetic devises for none of it is really poetry
its all raw thought

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"let them not control you"
 31yrs • M •
A CTL of 1 means that libarata is a contributing member of Captain Cynic.
lets get this strait
the words you say
push me over the edge
i try to be me
but your offence sucks to my walls
forcing me to run
i want to stay
but your always there
bitter overness
i fell in love but then
i realized your living one big lie
then i was crushed by the might of your plight
your one of few
made an alliance with my soul
for you my life can save
the life is gone

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"let them not control you"
 31yrs • M •
A CTL of 1 means that libarata is a contributing member of Captain Cynic.
haah, beena long time since ive been in here, hows it going everyone?

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"let them not control you"
 31yrs • M •
A CTL of 1 means that libarata is a contributing member of Captain Cynic.
revised spiders


here are spiders in the minds of all, do not let them cast the webs they spin for they can do nothing but spread dullnes, break out of the grasp and destroy them and forever be free in mind and spirit

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"let them not control you"
 31yrs • M •
A CTL of 1 means that libarata is a contributing member of Captain Cynic.
this time aorund, the world slips right on by, all the while on true lights shone the entire way. to me, it was the air, light, ground. all tangible ideas, feelings. pardon, the norm is just all confused, the wrong way, to feel about something thats not there, cant interact with you. this is your life, not anyone elses to control. let your happiness spread like the plague, hitting everyone in passage to the next realm. no way to go now, once your on your way, just gata go up, not down up and on to another realm for noone but you to see

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"let them not control you"
 31yrs • M •
A CTL of 1 means that libarata is a contributing member of Captain Cynic.
everytime i look, i seem to smile away, but theres no controling it now, but to stare at it all, the beauty right in front of my eyes, so lets all rejoice, at the coming of it all, just pass it around, but do be careful, for it all comes to a sweet reunion. so let us all rejoice, the good is on the rise

one i made for my girlfriend

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"let them not control you"
 31yrs • M •
A CTL of 1 means that libarata is a contributing member of Captain Cynic.
let the inner child and inner spirit mingle, let them grow
dont let the child inside wither and let the spirit grow
beat those that keep themselves penned up in texts that kill
they are the ones that ruin such great things

just end their pain and suffering and let those punitive souls shrivel more and more till they have nothing, and see everything in the end of what they were against for their entire existence.

who says you cant experience a little "sin" here and there, it helps form who you are and what you are. when you wage war against all you hate, you hate all.



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"let them not control you"
 31yrs • M •
A CTL of 1 means that libarata is a contributing member of Captain Cynic.
here i am, waiting for it all to become. waiting so it can be one.
just give it to me now, the pause is to great for a mortal to go alone.
lets just take the path and walk, walk past the generation in which we live and look into the future of less pain, yet more suffering.

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"let them not control you"
 29yrs • M •
A CTL of 1 means that zyphon is a contributing member of Captain Cynic.
so sad the human race becomes
covered in light
yet ever dark
no hope
no peace
no way to live
but one path to freedom
take the plunging dive
amidst the swirling abyss
never to rise again

good musings. keep um coming

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"sad is the heart that loves. its usually broken"
 27yrs • F •
A CTL of 1 means that KG-nonvirgin is a contributing member of Captain Cynic.
to Josh, I love you and I hope you can see this from way Up there

We made another, Mom killed it,
You hurt too much
I told you how and why she did,
You hurt too much
We broke our connection,
You hurt too much
I found another lover,
You hurt too much
You found another lover,
I hurt too much
You got engaged, and was happy with it,
I hurt too much
You were deceived, and was left in the dirt,
You hurt too much
You ended your life, with me holding you,
telling you that I was here and I loved you,
We hurt too much


Christina Marie Power

I keep my eyes from crying;
By not reminding myself of you.
But I use your light to guide me;
Because all I think about is you.

I keep my heart from bleeding;
By trying to move on.
I'll never escape the way I feel;
You'll never, truly, be gone.

All I see is all our memories;
All I see is what's not true.
All I think about is everything you promised;
All I think about is you.

Christina Marie Power

How am I supposed to stop seeing my
Happiness? When I see David,
my hands are clammy, my knees weak, my
thoughts foggy. My loins fill with need,
my heart soars. Am I to stop those, as
I cannot. How am I supposed to supress
those feelings?His touch makes me melt,
his voice makes my heart thud rapidly,
his touch makes it unbearable.
His kisses make my heart stop.
When we make love I reach to
the skies. I fly higher then the stars, then
David catches me.Do tell me how am I supposed
to stop that, when my heart
will never forgive
me? How am I supposed to break our
bond? I will not break it, nor deceive, for
whence I saw him, and loved him;I can see
no-other. My heart will not allow it.

Christina Marie Power

Being tossed around, like nothing
From person to person all at one's disposal
How am I to feel when you show no compassion?
You do what you want when you want, not asking
me for approval. It hurts when you don't care

I suppose I am an inconveinence, I can't help it
But I am not some rag-doll to be tossed away.
I have feelings too, or do you not care?
I am a person, a person you ditch when, it's
conveinent for you, when you want me gone.

Christina Marie Power

*These are just a few of the poems that I have posted online at Poetry.com. Just look under my name if you want more, some are Posted as Chrissy Marie Power though and sum are not mine. I am christina marie power, NOT christina marie POWERS! (There is a Powers). So yeah email me on CC and tell me if u like them.

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