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Dust in the Wind

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278 Posts / 32M
     :   19yrs   :  
zachfrenzel

Your words they speak and can move one, impressive enjoyed all actually been through a lot of what you've written about. Made me remember thanks.


""I'll follow him to the ends of the earth," she sobbed. Yes, darling. But the earth doesn't have any ends. Columbus fixed that - Tom Robbins"

654 Posts / 54M
     :   17yrs   :  
Oblivion

you are welcome.and thank you


"I remember ever look upon your face. The way you roll your eyes. The way you taste..."

654 Posts / 54M
     :   17yrs   :  
Oblivion

Sad Face

Shes' the most talented girl in the world...
To me.
Sometimes i wonder
Why I just cant see...
That im in love with a girl i cant have.

Her friends joke, trying to get her in trouble.
"Shes' always flirting with me."
I, honestly, say "I dont care,"
All so nonchalantly.
Apparently, I'm dating a girl i dont want.

Shes' beautiful.Shes' funny.
She's talented and smart.
Who the hell could leave
A girl like this AND that plays guitar?!
Unfortunantly, I'm in love with a girl i cant have.

She never thinks about what she says.
She is loud and rude.
How can i date a girl
With this kind of attitude?
Obviously, I'm dating a girl i dont want.

It's unfortunant,
Its obvious,
And all too apparent.
But I'm in love with a girl i cant have.
And I'm dating a girl i dont want.


"I remember ever look upon your face. The way you roll your eyes. The way you taste..."

382 Posts / 61M
     :   20yrs   :  
her

How fate plays with the emotions of the young,
that is painful sir, so very painful.


"I have nothing to be proud of today but hopefully tomorrow I will."

654 Posts / 54M
     :   17yrs   :  
Oblivion

Oblivion's Random Thoughts

this makes two
the deed has been done
now im stuck wondering again
"Will i find someone?"
ah,who cares.
not me,not you.
hey,random thought!
i need knew shoes
inspiration comes to me
like a wolf calling at the door
dare i open it?
sure.
writing to me is like a release,
you see,
its like punching old ladies
or stealing candy form babies.
im not talking about for me,of course,
only the demented psychos.
ya know,the guys who put people in holes
and wear pantyhoes.
i love how i dont care about this.
i didnt even bother a spell check or puncuation.
man,school sucks.
i need a vacation.
so now you see my thought process
over the course of 10 minutes.
did you think it would be a good poem?
i didnt.
(laughs maniacly)


"I remember ever look upon your face. The way you roll your eyes. The way you taste..."

654 Posts / 54M
     :   17yrs   :  
Oblivion

...That led me straight to you.

Now I can write.
This is no longer lame.
But as I sit here thinking,
These thoughts are all the same.
I write what i feel.
Yes, it is true.
Girl, you know there is nothing
I wouldent do for you.
Now that i have you,
I cant believe you are mine.
My heart has been released
From that bastardly serpent's bind.
I finally found that courage
I've been searching for for years.
There is no more longing.
There are no more tears.
There you go Baby.
Now you see
Just how much
You mean to me.


"I remember ever look upon your face. The way you roll your eyes. The way you taste..."

654 Posts / 54M
     :   17yrs   :  
Oblivion

This is one of my favorite poems. I was really exited when my English teacher said that whoever can memorize this poem gets extra credit.


Annabel Lee
by Edgar Allan Poe


It was many and many a year ago,
In a kingdom by the sea
That a maiden there lived whom you may know
By the name of Annabel Lee--
And this maiden she lived with no other thought
Than to love and be loved by me.

I was a child and she was a child,
In this kingdom by the sea,
But we loved with a love that was more than love--
I and my Annabel Lee--
With a love that the winged seraphs of heaven
Coveted her and me.

And this was the reason that, long ago,
In this kingdom by the sea,
A wind blew out of a cloud, chilling
My beautiful Annabel Lee;
So that her highborn kinsmen came
And bore her away from me,
To shut her up in a sepulchre
In this kingdom by the sea.

The angels, not half so happy in heaven,
Went envying her and me--
Yes!--that was the reason (as all men know,
In this kingdom by the sea)
That the wind came out of the cloud by night,
Chilling and killing my Annabel Lee.

But our love it was stronger by far than the love
Of those who were older than we--
Of many far wiser than we--
And neither the angels in heaven above,
Nor the demons down under the sea,
Can ever dissever my soul from the soul
Of the beautiful Annabel Lee:

For the moon never beams, without bringing me dreams
Of the beautiful Annabel Lee:
And the stars never rise, but I feel the bright eyes
Of the beautiful Annabel Lee:
And so, all the night-tide, I lay down by the side
Of my darling--my darling--my life and my bride,
In the sepulchre there by the sea--
In her tomb by the sounding sea.


"I remember ever look upon your face. The way you roll your eyes. The way you taste..."

654 Posts / 54M
     :   17yrs   :  
Oblivion

Forever & Always

We stand in the drive
Putting off 'Good Bye',
The wind in our hair,
Hiding tears in our eyes.
We reach for one-another
And hold on very tight.
We remember the time we met...
...That beautiful October night.
"You are a very special girl,
I hope you know that, right?"
"I love you so much",
She said to me again.
I told her that "I know."
And gave her a comforting grin.
"I will always love you." I said.
As tears fell from my eyes.
She knows that I always have.
So i forced myself to realize,
That if she had not left me
She might not have known.
Yet, If she had stayed,
She may never have grown.

~Originally Written by Karla Stone(my mom) over 20 years ago. Revised by me... Just now.
~Dedicated to Sara


"I remember ever look upon your face. The way you roll your eyes. The way you taste..."

654 Posts / 54M
     :   17yrs   :  
Oblivion

Just take the chance. It will be worth it every time.

When i look into your eyes,
I dare you not to blink.
Because when i stare into you
I see what our future can bring.
I see a little blue eyed girl
With golden blonde hair.
And you singing her back to sleep
After a midnight scare.
I see a button up shirt,
No more, no less.
"What do you want for breakfast?"
And your hair's all a mess.
I see you all bundled up,
And prepping your guitar.
Ready to get up there
And show 'em your a star.
Every time, i'm standing there,
Admiring, Staring.
So glad you are mine...
So glad you were daring...
For when i look into your eyes,
I dare you not to blink.


"I remember ever look upon your face. The way you roll your eyes. The way you taste..."

654 Posts / 54M
     :   17yrs   :  
Oblivion

Just a small revision.

It's Not Regret, It's a Lesson

I wish i could go back in time.
I know what i'd change or undo.
From a silly bellyflop,
To an unspoken "I love you."
From an 'F' in school
Or a broken bone,
To not asking her out
And spending Valentine's Day alone.
I'd change that lost breath
Into a stolen kiss.
I just wish i knew
What i never had, I'd miss.
But whatever happens, happens.
Whats done is done.
That poem has been written.
That song has been sung.


"I remember ever look upon your face. The way you roll your eyes. The way you taste..."

Dust in the Wind
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