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Mid Day Rain

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 26yrs • M •
JamesW is new to Captain Cynic and has less than 15 posts. New members have certain restrictions and must fill in CAPTCHAs to use various parts of the site.
Mid Day Rain
A beauty as true as light
beside me, simply float on sky
The droplets slowly slides down
then pounds the ground, with
greater force the ice of rain
Strikes.
The light flickkers and goes out
The after glimmer of light
hanging on her face and figure
alike.
Slowly she moves her hair
and continues to pour her wisdom to paper in the low light
of the mid day
rain.
The droplets holt and the clouds
move. The sun has won his battle
Now her face and figure
shows greater detail in beauty with
light.


Please review and add comments, its my first poem and I want to know how I am doing.

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 26yrs • M •
JamesW is new to Captain Cynic and has less than 15 posts. New members have certain restrictions and must fill in CAPTCHAs to use various parts of the site.
OooooO that is a great idae. Thanks I will user your advice. And holt is like stopping in a instant

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