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Heres a little poem i wrote for people to know me by.

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 34yrs • M •
deathismygame is new to Captain Cynic and has less than 15 posts. New members have certain restrictions and must fill in CAPTCHAs to use various parts of the site.
Heres a little poem i wrote for people to know me by.
The Cold love

This place, My face, This race, It all came to disgrace. This love, This cold bitter love, Which has been given, Is driven, Deep into my soul,
Like a deep black hole. I'm torn, I'm worn, It's time for me to get out, yell out, For my love, Whose not there. This love we share, Is bare, It hurts, The shadow lurks, The shadow of hate, See this is my fate, I guess this is a taste, Of what my life feels in haste.

Write me back tell me what you think people and thanks for reading. This poem was writen for a girl who broke up with me rather should i say cheated on me. We were together for 5 years then she ended it. Brittiany Rhodes if anyone knows her.

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"Death is here cause im dead inside"
 31yrs • M •
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i'm sorry about your gf, it's her los,e but i really feel your pain in this piece.

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""Man is least himself when he talks in his own person. Give him a mask, and he will tell you the truth" -oscar wilde"
 32yrs • F •
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nothing hurts more than seeing the person you love, love someone else. i'm sorry.

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Heres a little poem i wrote for people to know me by.
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