crap

dis is crap
give us some feedback

i no u think itz funny
the way i scream out your name.
i no u think i\'m joking dont u understand i\'m going insane
i dream of an old story
the one where u loved me
the one where saved me from them.
as they tore me from inside
i wish u wud com back
the dream itz fading away
and music itz going
itz running away, just lyk u all did
the air turning blue
the laughter in me is lost
my soul has fallen apart

Sounds like some words are missing and theres really no meaning like crap

Here is a real life poem made by me as follows:
gimme some feedback too.

I was lost without you,

L osing you broke my heart,
O ver time, the memories became
V ague... I knew i had to
E nvisage the day i would see you again.

Y ou brought me around and
O ver the world back to you,
U nderstand now that i am here
............do you love me
.......................... like i love you?

'and theres really no meaning like crap'

wot do u mean by dat?
u're poems good. do u luv her or are u just ryting it.

Damn, that poem came from when i was in the deepest love with my girl, now shes overseas....so sad
oh, i mean it doesnt have a real meaning..

someones dying, betrayed and alone.
love, isnt that a damn complicated word
17 is sucha young age to fall in love.

i know, but there is alot of history behind it

lucky u