Sleep living

Hi I'm a hiphop artist from England with a bit of a poetical approuch to hiphop hope to here good feeback

Drinking your way through a night of sleep living
Sleazy Cheap women each given a drum to beat rhythm
Heart rates rissen driven to blurred vision 
Colours from a prism Slump to see the sea glissen

Learking lessons Sands of time that dreams beckon
Tessting the fibers that join the gaps between each second
Dirt is just past souls after we rot
Lost the plot we are all stars that galaxys forgot

Skin covering up blood and guts twingless dove
Scavanger hoping for love but it only rains from above 
Im just Questioning Questions to answers  
Left with no answers to the question we where after

Pure slander pause for thought and punder
Let world wounder an dream eternity in slumber
When I go to sleep at night I only pray to me
Hope to breath hope to hear hope to smell hope to see