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     :   14yrs   :  
Betrayal14

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I wrote this like a week ago. I kinda like it. Tell me what ya think.


Him and me that's not right. Him and her.I wish that wasn't right either but it is. He doesn't love me he loves her. I just wanna know that he lays in bed at night thinking of me. I just want to know that he loves me more then her. What about him made me fall in love with him? Everything. He's absolutely perfect. His amazing eyes how they look into mine. Just the sound of his voice makes my heart melt. Just the way he does everything. I'm lost without seeing him everyday. Him smiling back at me is the only thing I could ever want. When I'm with him I wish it would never end. I only wake up in the morning for him just to see him. Just to see him and smile for no reason at all.

Just the way he does everything makes me love him more and more everyday.....


721 Posts / 23M
     :   35yrs   :  
Sorceress

ahh young love...


""Each child holds the world in an open hand to mould it into any shape they choose.""

721 Posts / 23M
     :   35yrs   :  
Sorceress

Sorry, nice poem except if he loves someone else then sorry! unrequited love (don't think that's spelt right) is the worst sort, don't dwell on him


""Each child holds the world in an open hand to mould it into any shape they choose.""

488 Posts / 37M
     :   16yrs   :  
oblivion

that reminded me of me when i was 13.lol


"Whatever doesn't kill you will.....well,it will hurt like hell, but it wont kill you."

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