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Wedding Poem for Scrapbook Pages

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Wedding Poem for Scrapbook Pages [+ favourites]

For a wedding I am going to give each guest a sticky note on a piece of 8x8 paper with a poem. The poem is below and if anyone could make it sound better I would appreciate it very much. I especially don't like the last two lines. Thanks!

With this pen you will find
A piece of paper for you to sign,
Please take a moment on a page so bare
A sentiment or two to share,
Your thoughts, memories, or advice
As they become husband and wife,
Then your picture we'll add to a book
Where the happy couple can look.

Then at the bottom I'm going to add:
Please write your message on the
non-photo half of the page and
leave it in the basket. You may
keep the pen.

Any ideas? Thanks!


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With this pen you shall find
A piece of paper on which to sign,
Please take a moment on a page so bare
A sentimental note or two to share,
Your thoughts, your memories, or advice
As these two become husband and wife,
Your reflective mark, we'll add to a book
The happy couple will take a close look.


"I am Akba-Atatdia"

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