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Untitled Poem

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 40yrs • F •
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Untitled Poem
Wrote this after watching Seisouhen (an angst/drama-filled Japanese OVA)

One hundred times I've almost drown
Lost my breath, lost a pound
One hundred times I've cried to sleep
Lied awake, yet couldn't weep

One thousand times, I've fought these tears
Fought these thoughts throughout the years
One thousand times I've sat alone
Cried out loud, fell like a stone

Ten thousand words run through my mind
Through my heart, yet I am blind
Ten thousand scars break through my flesh
Show my pain, I cannot rest

One million times I've bled for you
Bled for nothing, what can I do?
One million times I've wished to cry
Hurt inside, and wished to die

Opinions welcomed~!

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"Two wrongs don't make a right but one wrong isn't right either."
 35yrs • M
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One hundred creatures I have downed
Took their breath, put them out.
One hundred creatures I have seen
Stripped of almost everything.

One thousand creatures I have feared.
Scared of those who I loved, those I held dear.
One thousand creatures have stood in my mind
All at once remind me of my crimes.

Ten thousand words run through my mind.
Through my heart, yet I am blind.
Ten thousand scars break through my flesh
Show pain, I cannot rest.

One million creatures I have bled for.
Bled for nothing? Where are the records?
One million creatures have wished to cry.
Hurt inside, and wished to die.

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"Why cry for those that often cry? Instead, help them smile, and smile for those that smile."
 46yrs • M •
dapharoah69 is new to Captain Cynic and has less than 15 posts. New members have certain restrictions and must fill in CAPTCHAs to use various parts of the site.
I love untitled poems. They give u the opportunity to create a name for it yourself in your mind to better suit you and what youre going through if you can relate to that particular poem. I LOVE IT!!

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