Tears

Tears [+ favourites]

please give me input / your interpretation

Tears

Tears, shed from pain.
pain of mind;
pain of body;
pain of heart.
Fall like the moon.
Falling slowly;
Falling surely;
Leaving behind light
Light of relief;
Light of joy;
Light of tomorrow;
Tears, shed from light.

i like it. nothing grand but its sweet and brings comfort. i think anyway. i like how it resolves. i sometimes try to do that in my poetry but only come up with more qeustions.

goodstuff.

"Wht cry for those that often cry? Instead, help them smile, and smile for those that smile."

ditch the semicolons.

"In the beginning, night was memory was water, and in the cool aquamarine depths dreams swam freely."