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Tears

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 35yrs • M •
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Tears
please give me input / your interpretation

Tears

Tears, shed from pain.
pain of mind;
pain of body;
pain of heart.
Fall like the moon.
Falling slowly;
Falling surely;
Leaving behind light
Light of relief;
Light of joy;
Light of tomorrow;
Tears, shed from light.

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 35yrs • M
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i like it. nothing grand but its sweet and brings comfort. i think anyway. i like how it resolves. i sometimes try to do that in my poetry but only come up with more qeustions.

goodstuff.

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"Why cry for those that often cry? Instead, help them smile, and smile for those that smile."
 36yrs • F •
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ditch the semicolons.

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"In the beginning, night was memory was water, and in the cool aquamarine depths dreams swam freely."
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