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LETS FINISH THIS WITH PEACE

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     :   49yrs   :  
okcitykid

LETS FINISH THIS WITH PEACE [+ favourites]

In the news today
Four soldiers die
Sad to say
Its just another day

It's just not no fun
As a living veteran
Glad I'm not the only one
We're not having any fun

Rain drops hitting the ground
Can you hear a single one
In all of this fun
Can't wait tell its done
Tired of having all this fun
Cries one soldier in the night

They're proud
Won't leave today
They're proud
They just want to stay
At least that's what the media say
I say
Wish I was having so much fun
A patriot with a gun
Are they done
When they're dead
and wasn't it a lot of fun

This happens everyday
Someone dies
No way
It's really not a happy day
Not yesterday
Not tomorrow
On this course we stay

This game just isn't fun anymore
This isn't a game anymore
People died
Now the fun is over

Lets rename the players
And have a game of peace
Where that darkness meets the light
It's alright
Because the darkness falls on all of us
At night

When we win that game of peace
We can say - we won
They can say they won
and we can all have lots of fun

By Roger The Okcitykid


"A fool says I know and a wise man says I wonder."

7 Posts / 38M
     :   16yrs   :  
browndruid

The ending shatters the mood. Nothing short of complete destruction. You kept it up throughout, why did you have to ruin it?


"Someday, I will be guided to that place where everything is surrealistic. Or am I not real?"

2203 Posts / 68M
     :   49yrs   :  
okcitykid

You might be right


"A fool says I know and a wise man says I wonder."

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