Ripples

hey there, what better way to get to know you then to share some of my work! honest opinions would be much appreicated (sp?)

now how do i get this image tag to work..........


The wings of Darkness,
Hold me in a cool caress.
cool breath hovers above my neck,
whispering endearments of the fairest.

i begin to relax,
openning myself,
a bare shiver,
an overlapping mouth.

The wings get tighter,
Breath is now hard to find.
chest begins to burn,
Darkness fills my mind.

He holds the limp body.
No longer at one with this.
Lowers her to the ground,
Her life now his.
And leaves her to be found.


HOW do you get images to work please?

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