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 35yrs • M •
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Pieces
Tell me what you think of this piece, it's supposed to be written as a song.

Stretched out my mind and snapped it like a twig
Couldn't feel anything except my will dying
Why can't you see my heart
I cut myself open and yet you never look

See the pieces spill
All over you

One day you will realize this pain that I bear for you
Holding on to what we had trying to keep it alive
But you are like a foot stomping out the fire
That burns inside of me
Burning only for you

Watch the pieces burn
All over you

Tearing me down from the pedestal which I stood atop
Brought you up there with me just to watch you fall
But still I reached out to you
Holding on for both our lives

See the pieces shatter
All over you

But you never recognized what we had
Your feelings were so fleeting
What a wasted life I shared with you
All those days I can never get back

Watch the pieces spill
All over me

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"My drum skills > Your drum skills"
 40yrs • M •
A CTL of 1 means that Wyote is a contributing member of Captain Cynic.
i feel like that a lot, i think this song is very relatable to a lot of people!

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"A loving heart is the beginning of all knowledge. - Thomas Carlyle"
 42yrs • M •
motorbreath is new to Captain Cynic and has less than 15 posts. New members have certain restrictions and must fill in CAPTCHAs to use various parts of the site.
^ agreed

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