Tell me what you think of this piece, it's supposed to be written as a song.
Stretched out my mind and snapped it like a twig Couldn’t feel anything except my will dying Why can’t you see my heart I cut myself open and yet you never look
See the pieces spill All over you
One day you will realize this pain that I bear for you Holding on to what we had trying to keep it alive But you are like a foot stomping out the fire That burns inside of me Burning only for you
Watch the pieces burn All over you
Tearing me down from the pedestal which I stood atop Brought you up there with me just to watch you fall But still I reached out to you Holding on for both our lives
See the pieces shatter All over you
But you never recognized what we had Your feelings were so fleeting What a wasted life I shared with you All those days I can never get back