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Pieces

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187 Posts / 60M
     :   19yrs   :  
UnderDawg

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Tell me what you think of this piece, it's supposed to be written as a song.

Stretched out my mind and snapped it like a twig
Couldn’t feel anything except my will dying
Why can’t you see my heart
I cut myself open and yet you never look

See the pieces spill
All over you

One day you will realize this pain that I bear for you
Holding on to what we had trying to keep it alive
But you are like a foot stomping out the fire
That burns inside of me
Burning only for you

Watch the pieces burn
All over you

Tearing me down from the pedestal which I stood atop
Brought you up there with me just to watch you fall
But still I reached out to you
Holding on for both our lives

See the pieces shatter
All over you

But you never recognized what we had
Your feelings were so fleeting
What a wasted life I shared with you
All those days I can never get back

Watch the pieces spill
All over me


"My drum skills > Your drum skills"

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2885 Posts / 57M
     :   24yrs   :  
Wyote

i feel like that a lot, i think this song is very relatable to a lot of people!


"UNIX is an operating system, OS/2 is half an operating system, Windows is a shell, and DOS is a boot partition virus. ~Peter H. Coffin"

1 Posts / 54M
     :   26yrs   :  
motorbreath

^ agreed


"its all fun and games till someone 'loses' an eye"

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